The Fourth Movement Pg. 2

A continuation of Text Me When It's Over. You can find the first page of the First Movement here: [link] and the fic (written by the talented immaculately-flawed) here: [link]

I DID IT. One day off and I FINISHED ANYWAY. All hail BlueEyed, mortals! Baaaah, I don't know how I feel about this page. I mean, the shading's nice. But John's awkwardly dodging a car and something about Sherlock's face doesn't sit right with me. Haha, I don't even care. I'm going to the grocery store. *falls over*

I'm going to reply to all of your lovely comments as soon as I return. :3

EDIT: I fixed Sherlock's face and John actually looks like he's dodging cars rather than skipping through a parking lot now.

Page One: [link]
Page Two: Here.
Page Three: [link]